Hi Madison,
What I really like about your drawing of a giant lobster is that you’ve made me feel what it would be like to actually be a lobster. Lobsters don’t see all that well. They mostly get around by smell and by sensing movement through their legs, and you’ve given this lobster plenty of legs to depend on. That’s what a good writer does. A good writer will make the reader feel what it is like to be a character in a book. Well done!
Happy reading,
Jessica