Hi Juliana,
Thank you so much for your letter. I think it is terrific that you like to write magical books and that you try to make your stories very detailed. Details are so important to include. I think details help to make stories believable. I also like how detailed you made your drawing. Just look at all the parts of the giant lobster you’ve included. Adding grains of sand makes me think about walking on the beach in bare feet! Well done!
Happy reading!
Jessica