I am intrigued by the title of your manuscript, The Magic Mirror Days of Lauren and Caroline. You might want to change the names of your two characters so that your readers don’t confuse your characters with you and your best friend, Caroline. Writers do that a lot. When they base their characters on people they know, they change the names of their characters so that they have more creative freedom to get the characters to do and say whatever the writer wants. It’s way more fun that way!